I am not they type of this kind of comments, but, I have to say... I like your story much more than the original. Much more introspective, and with more things taken in consideration....Though I agree with the general concepts of Jessica's one (strange to write Jessica, btw, as it's my name too lol), I think they were particularly judgemental without considering all variables. Plus, it kind of insulted housewives which was weird

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